CHAPTER IV

NOTE UPON THE SHORTEST FORMS OF ENGLISH POETRY

Perhaps there is an idea among Japanese students that one general

difference between Japanese and Western poetry is that the former

cultivates short forms and the latter longer ones, gut this is only in

part true. It is true that short forms of poetry have been cultivated in

the Far East more than in modern Europe; but in all European literature

short forms of poetry are to be found--indeed quite as short as anything

in Japanese. Like the Japanese, the old Greeks, who carried poetry to the

highest perfection that it has ever attained, delighted in short forms;

and the Greek Anthology is full of compositions containing only two or

three lines. You will find beautiful translations of these in Symonds's

"Studies of Greek Poets," in the second volume. Following Greek taste, the

Roman poets afterwards cultivated short forms of verse, but they chiefly

used such verse for satirical purposes, unfortunately; I say,

unfortunately, because the first great English poets who imitated the

ancients were chiefly influenced by the Latin writers, and they also used

the short forms for epigrammatic satire rarely for a purely esthetic

object. Ben Jonson both wrote and translated a great number of very short

stanzas--two lines and four lines; but Jonson was a satirist in these

forms. Herrick, as you know, delighted in very short poems; but he was

greatly influenced by Jonson, and many of his couplets and of his

quatrains are worthless satires or worthless jests. However, you will find

some short verses in Herrick that almost make you think of a certain class

of Japanese poems. After the Elizabethan Age, also, the miniature poems

were still used in the fashion set by the Roman writers,--then the

eighteenth century deluged us with ill-natured witty epigrams of the like

brief form. It was not until comparatively modern times that our Western

world fully recognized the value of the distich, triplet or quatrain for

the expression of beautiful thoughts, rather than for the expression of

ill-natured ones. But now that the recognition has come, it has been

discovered that nothing is harder than to write a beautiful poem of two or

four lines. Only great masters have been truly successful at it. Goethe,

you know, made a quatrain that has become a part of world-literature:

Who ne'er his bread in sorrow ate,--

Who ne'er the lonely midnight hours,

Weeping upon his bed has sate,

He knows ye not, ye Heavenly Powers!

--meaning, of course, that inspiration and wisdom come to us only through

sorrow, and that those who have never suffered never can be wise. But in

the universities of England a great deal of short work of a most excellent

kind has been done in Greek and Latin; and there is the celebrated case of

an English student who won a prize by a poem of a single line. The subject

given had been the miracle of Christ's turning water into wine at the

marriage feast; and while other scholars attempted elaborate composition

on the theme, this student wrote but one verse, of which the English

translation is

The modest water saw its Lord, and blushed.

Of course the force of the idea depends upon the popular conception of

wine being red. The Latin and Greek model, however, did not seem to

encourage much esthetic effort in short poems of English verse until the

time of the romantic movement. Then, both in France and England, many

brief forms of poetry made their appearance. In France, Victor Hugo

attempted composition in astonishingly varied forms of verse--some forms

actually consisting of only two syllables to a line. With this

surprisingly short measure begins one of Hugo's most remarkably early

poems, "Les Djins," representing the coming of evil spirits with a storm,

their passing over the house where a man is at prayer, and departing into

the distance again. Beginning with only two syllables to the line, the

measure of the poem gradually widens as the spirits approach, becomes very

wide, very long and sonorous as they reach the house, and again shrinks

back to lines of two syllables as the sound of them dies away. In England

a like variety of experiments has been made; but neither in France nor in

England has the short form yet been as successfully cultivated as it was

among the Greeks. We have some fine examples; but, as an eminent English

editor observed a few years ago, not enough examples to make a book. And

of course this means that there are very few; for you can make a book of

poetry very well with as little as fifty pages of largely and widely

printed text. However, we may cite a few modern instances.

I think that about the most perfect quatrains we have are those of the

extraordinary man, Walter Savage Landor, who, you know, was a rare Greek

scholar, all his splendid English work being very closely based upon the

Greek models. He made a little epitaph upon himself, which is matchless of

its kind:

I strove with none, for none was worth my strife;

Nature I loved, and next to Nature, Art;

I warmed both hands before the fire of life:

It sinks; and I am ready to depart.

You know that Greeks used the short form a great deal for their exquisite

epitaphs, and that a considerable part of the anthology consists of

epitaphic literature. But the quatrain has a much wider range than this

funereal limitation, and one such example of epitaph will suffice.

Only one English poet of our own day, and that a minor one, has attempted

to make the poem of four lines a specialty--that is William Watson. He has

written a whole volume of such little poems, but very few of them are

successful. As I said before, we have not enough good poems of this sort

for a book; and the reason is not because English poets despise the short

form, but because it is supremely difficult. The Greeks succeeded in it,

but we are still far behind the Greeks in the shaping of any kind of

verse. The best of Watson's pieces take the form of philosophical

suggestions; and this kind of verse is particularly well adapted to

philosophical utterance.

Think not thy wisdom can illume away

The ancient tanglement of night and day.

Enough to acknowledge both, and both revere;

They see not clearliest who see all things clear.

That is to say, do not think that any human knowledge will ever be able to

make you understand the mystery of the universe with its darkness and

light, its joy and pain. It is best to revere the powers that make both

good and evil, and to remember that the keenest, worldly, practical minds

are not the minds that best perceive the great truths and mysteries of

existence. Here is another little bit, reminding us somewhat of Goethe's

quatrain, already quoted.

Lives there whom pain hath evermore passed by

And sorrow shunned with an averted eye?

Him do thou pity,--him above the rest,

Him, of all hapless mortals most unblessed.

That needs no commentary, and it contains a large truth in small space.

Here is a little bit on the subject of the artist's ambition, which is

also good.

The thousand painful steps at last are trod,

At last the temple's difficult door we win,

But perfect on his pedestal, the God

Freezes us hopeless when we enter in.

The higher that the artist climbs by effort, the nearer his approach to

the loftier truth, the more he understands how little his very best can

achieve. It is the greatest artist, he who veritably enters the presence

of God--that most feels his own weakness; the perception of beauty that

other men can not see, terrifies him, freezes him motionless, as the poet

says.

Out of all of Watson's epigrams I believe these are the best. The rest

with the possible exception of those on the subject of love seem to me

altogether failures. Emerson and various American poets also attempted the

quatrain--but Emerson's verse is nearly always bad, even when his thought

is sublime. One example of Emerson will suffice.

Thou canst not wave thy staff in air,

Or dip thy paddle in the lake,

But it carves the bow of beauty there,

And the ripples in rhyme the oar forsake.

The form is atrociously bad; but the reflection is grand--it is another

way of expressing the beautiful old Greek thought that "God _geometrizes_

everywhere"--that is, that all motion is in geometrical lines, and full of

beauty. You can pick hundreds of fine things in very short verse out of

Emerson, but the verse is nearly always shapeless; the composition of the

man invariably makes us think of diamonds in the rough, jewels uncut. So

far as form goes a much better master of quatrain is the American poet

Aldrich, who wrote the following little thing, entitled "Popularity."

Such kings of shreds have wooed and won her,

Such crafty knaves her laurel owned,

It has become almost an honour

Not to be crowned.

This is good verse. The reference to "a king of shreds and patches"--that

is, a beggar king--you will recognize as Shakespearean. But although this

pretty verse has in it more philosophy than satire, it approaches the

satiric class of epigrams. Neither America nor England has been able to do

very much in the sort of verse that we have been talking about. Now this

is a very remarkable thing,--because at the English universities beautiful

work has been done in Greek or Latin--in poems of a single line, of two

lines, of three lines and other very brief measures. Why can it not be

done in English? I suspect that it is because our English language has not

yet become sufficiently perfect, sufficiently flexible, sufficiently

melodious to allow of great effect with a very few words. We can do the

thing in Greek or in Latin because either Greek or Latin is a more perfect

language.

So much for theory. I should like to suggest, however, that it is very

probable many attempts at these difficult forms of poetry will be

attempted by English poets within the next few years. There is now a

tendency in that direction. I do not know whether such attempts will be

successful; but I should like you to understand that for Western poets

they are extremely difficult and that you ought to obtain from the

recognition of this fact a new sense of the real value of your own short

forms of verse in the hands of a master. Effects can be produced in

Japanese which the Greeks could produce with few syllables, but which the

English can not. Now it strikes me that, instead of even thinking of

throwing away old forms of verse in order to invent new ones, the future

Japanese poets ought rather to develop and cultivate and prize the forms

already existing, which belong to the genius of the language, and which

have proved themselves capable of much that no English verse or even

French verse could accomplish. Perhaps only the Italian is really

comparable to Japanese in some respects; you can perform miracles with

Italian verse.

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