Chapter XXIII. 20th May 1882-July 1883, The Meeting of Burton and Payne

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106. Mrs. Grundy begins to roar. May 1882.

In May 1882, Burton called on Mr. Payne, and the matter of The Arabian

Nights was fully discussed. It then transpired that Burton's project was

still entirely in nubibus. He told Mr. Payne that he had no manuscript

of any kind beyond "a sheet or two of notes," [356] and it was

afterwards gathered from his words that these notes were a mere syllabus

of the contents of the Boulac edition of the Nights--the only one of the

four printed texts (Calcutta, Macnaghten, Boulac and Breslau) used and

combined by Mr. Payne with which Burton was then acquainted. [357] Mr.

Payne's first volume was completely in type and had for some weeks been

held over for Burton's return to England. Of the remaining volumes three

were ready for press, and the rest only awaited fair copying. Burton's

thoughts, however, were then completely occupied with the Gold Coast,

consequently the whole project of collaboration fell through. Mr.

Payne's first volume duly appeared; and as the result of further

conversations it was arranged that Burton should read Mr. Payne's

subsequent proofs, though he declined to accept any remuneration unless

it should turn out that his assistance was necessary. In June, Mr.

Payne submitted the first proofs of Vol. ii. to Burton. Meantime the

literalism of Mr. Payne's translation had created extraordinary stir,

and Burton wrote thus forcefully on the matter (June 3rd): "Please send

me a lot of advertisements. [358] I can place a multitude of copies.

Mrs. Grundy is beginning to roar; already I hear the voice of her. And

I know her to be an arrant w---- and tell her so, and don't care a -----

for her."

The event at Trieste that summer was the opening of a Grand

International Exhibition--the hobby of the Governor of the town--Baron

de Pretis, and Burton thus refers to it in a letter written to Mr.

Payne, 5th August (1882). "We arrived here just in time for the opening

of the Exhibition, August 1st. Everything went off well, but next

evening an Orsini shell was thrown which killed one and wounded five,

including my friend Dr. Dorn, Editor of the Triester Zeitung. The

object, of course, was to injure the Exhibition, and the effect will be

ruinous. I expect more to come and dare not leave my post. So while

my wife goes to Marienbad, I must content myself with the Baths at

Monfalcone, [359] distant only one hour by rail" In the next letter

(August 14th) Burton refers to a proposed special quarto (large paper)

edition of Mr. Payne's Nights, the scheme for which, however, fell

through. "I am delighted with the idea," he says, "for though not a

bibliophile in practice (L s. d. preventing) I am entirely in theory."

There is also an amusing reference to a clergyman who after giving his

name for a copy withdrew it. Says Burton, "If the Rev. A. miss this

opportunity of grace he can blame only himself. It is very sad but not

to be helped.... And now good luck to the venture." Later he observes,

"The fair sex appears wild to get at the Nights. [360] I have received

notes from two upon the nice subject, with no end of complaints about

stern parients, brothers and brothers-in-law."

In September Burton asks for the loan of Payne's copy of the Calcutta

Edition (Macnaghten) and enquires after Vol. i. He says "What news

of Vol. i.? I am very anxious to see it, and so are many female

correspondents. I look forward with great pleasure to the work."

It was now understood that an attack was to be made on Payne's volume in

the press. Says Burton, September 29th (1882). "Perhaps it will be best

to let ------- [361] sing his song. -------- has no end of enemies, and

I can stir up a small wasp's nest without once appearing in the matter.

The best answer will be showing up a few of Lane's mistakes, but this

must be done with the greatest care, so that no hole can be picked

in the critique. [362] I enclose three sonnets, a specimen of my next

volume of Camoens, and should much like any suggestions from you. They

are line for line and mostly word for word. But that is nothing; the

question is, are they readable English? They'll be printed at my own

expense, so they will ruin nobody. Switzerland has set you up and don't

let the solicitor's office pull you down."

On October 2nd he says: "Glad to hear of a new edition of Lane: it

will draw attention to the subject. I must see what can be done with

reviewers. Saturday and I are at drawn daggers, and --------of ------

is such a stiff young she-prig that I hardly know what to do about

him. However, I shall begin work at once by writing and collecting the

vulnerable points of the clique. ----- is a very much hated man, and

there will be no difficulty." On the 8th, in reference to the opposing

"clique," Burton writes: "In my own case I should encourage a row with

this bete noire; but I can readily understand your having reasons for

wishing to keep it quiet." Naturally, considering the tactics that were

being employed against them, the Villon Society, which published Mr.

Payne's works, had no wish to draw the attention of the authorities to

the moral question. Indeed, of the possible action of the authorities,

as instigated by the clique, the Society stood in some fear.

Burton goes on: "I shall write to-day to T----- to know how ---- is best

hit. T----- hates me--so do most people. Meanwhile, you must (either

yourself or by proxy) get a list of Lane's laches. I regret to say my

copy of his Modern Egyptians has been lost or stolen, and with it are

gone the lists of his errata I had drawn up many years ago. Of course I

don't know Arabic, but who does? One may know a part of it, a corner of

the field, but all! Bah! Many thanks for the notes on the three sonnets

[Camoens]. Most hearty thanks for the trouble you have taken. The

remarks are those of a scholar and a translator."

Later, Burton sent Payne other Camoens sonnets to look over. Writing on

29th October 1882, he says, "Many thanks for the sonnet. Your version

is right good, but it is yourself, not me. In such a matter each man

expresses his own individuality. I shall follow your advice about the

quatrains and tercets. No. 19 is one of the darkest on account of its

extreme simplicity. I shall trouble you again."

The first proofs (pp. 1-144) of Vol. ii. were read by Burton in October

1882, and returned by him October 21st. In his letter to Mr. Payne of

that date he says, "It will only be prudent to prepare for an attack. I

am perfectly ready to justify a complete translation of the book. And if

I am obliged to say what I think about Lane's Edition there will be hard

hitting. Of course I wish to leave his bones in peace, but --- may

make that impossible. Curious to see three editions of the 1,000 Nights

advertised at the same time, not to speak of the bastard. [363] I return

you nine sheets [of proofs] by parcels post registered. You have done

your work very well, and my part is confined to a very small amount of

scribble which you will rub out at discretion."

Subsequently Burton observed that Mr. Payne required no assistance of

any kind; and therefore he re-refused to accept remuneration for reading

the proofs. Naturally, they differed, as Arabists all do, upon certain

points, but on all subjects save two Burton allowed that Mr. Payne's

opinion was as good as his own.

The first concerned the jingles in the prose portions of the Nights,

such as "The trees are growing and the waters flowing and Allah all good

bestowing." Burton wanted them to be preserved, but to this Mr. Payne

could not consent, and he gives the reasons in his Terminal Essay.

The second exception was the treatment of the passages referring to a

particular subject; and this indicates to us clearly the difference in

the ideas and aims of the two men. Of artistry, of what FitzGerald calls

"sinking and reducing," Burton had no notion. "If anything is in any

redaction of the original, in it should go," he said. "Never mind how

shocking it may be to modern and western minds. If I sin, I sin in good

company--in the company of the authors of the Authorised Version of the

Bible, who did not hesitate to render literatim certain passages which

persons aiming simply at artistic effect would certainly have omitted."

Payne on the other hand was inclined to minimise these passages as much

as possible. Though determined that his translation should be a complete

one, yet he entirely omitted coarsenesses whenever he could find excuse

to do so--that is to say, when they did not appear in all the texts. If

no such excuse existed he clothed the idea in skilful language. [364]

Nothing is omitted; but it is of course within the resources of literary

art to say anything without real offence. Burton, who had no aptitude

for the task; who, moreover, had other aims, constantly disagreed with

Payne upon this point.

Thus, writing 12th May 1883, he says: "You are drawing it very mild. Has

there been any unpleasantness about plain speaking? Poor Abu Nuwas [365]

is (as it were) castrated. I should say 'Be bold or audace,' &c., only

you know better than I do how far you can go and cannot go. I should

simply translate every word."

"What I meant by literalism," he says, 1st October 1883, "is literally

translating each noun (in the long lists which so often occur) in its

turn, so that the student can use the translation."

This formed no part of Mr. Payne's scheme, in fact was directly opposed

to the spirit of his work, which was to make the translation, while

quite faithful to the original, a monument of noble English prose and

verse.

"I hold the Nights," continues Burton, the best of class books, and when

a man knows it, he can get on with Arabs everywhere. He thus comments

on Payne's Vol. iv., some of the tales of which, translate them as you

will, cannot be other than shocking. "Unfortunately it is these offences

(which come so naturally in Greece and Persia, and which belong strictly

to their fervid age) that give the book much of its ethnological value.

I don't know if I ever mentioned to you a paper (unpublished) of mine

showing the geographical limits of the evil. [366] I shall publish it

some day and surprise the world. [367] I don't live in England, and I

don't care an asterisk for Public Opinion. [368] I would rather tread

on Mrs. Grundy's pet corn than not, she may howl on her *** *** to her

heart's content." On August 24th (1883) Burton says, "Please keep up in

Vol. v. this literality in which you began. My test is that every Arab

word should have its equivalent English. ...Pity we can't manage to end

every volume with a tidbit! Would it be dishonest to transfer a tale

from one night or nights to another or others? I fancy not, as this is

done in various editions. A glorious ending for Vol. iv. Would have been

The Three Wishes or the Night of Power [369] and The Cabinet with Five

Shelves." [370]

107. The Search for Palmer, October 1882.

Burton was now to make what proved to be his last expedition. All the

year Egypt had been ablaze with the rebellion of Arabi Pasha. Alexandria

was bombarded by the English on July 11th, Arabi suffered defeat at

Tell-el-Kebir three months later. On the commencement of the rebellion

the British Government sent out Burton's old friend Professor Palmer to

the Sinaitic peninsula with a view to winning the tribes in that part of

the British side, and so preventing the destruction of the Suez Canal.

The expedition was atrociously planned, and the fatal mistake was also

made of providing it with L3,000 in gold. Palmer landed at Jaffa at the

end of June, and then set out via Gaza across the "Short Desert," for

Suez, where he was joined by Captain Gill and Lieutenant Charrington. In

fancy one hears him as he enters on his perilous journey asking himself

that question, which was so absurdly frequent in his lips, "I wonder

what will happen?"

It is customary for travellers, before entering the Arabian wastes,

to hire a Ghafir, that is, a guide and protector. Palmer, instead of

securing a powerful chief, as the case required, selected a man of small

account named Matr Nassar, and this petty shaykh and his nephew were the

expedition's only defence.

The doomed party left Suez on August 8th. On the 10th at midnight they

were attacked by the Bedawin. "Palmer expostulated with his assassins;

but all his sympathetic facility, his appeals to Arab honour and

superstition, his threats, his denunciations, and the gift of eloquence

which had so often prevailed with the wild men, were unheeded." As

vainly, Matr Nassar [371] covered his proteges with his aba [372] thus

making them part of his own family. On the evening of August 11th the

captives were led to the high bank of the Wady Sudr, where it received

another and smaller fiumara yet unnamed, and bidden to prepare for

death. Boldly facing his enemies, Palmer cursed them [373] in Biblical

language, and in the name of the Lord. But while the words were in his

mouth, a bullet struck him and he fell. His companions also fell in cold

blood, and the bodies of all three were thrown down the height [374]--a

piteous denouement--and one that has features in common with the tragic

death scene of another heroic character of this drama--General Gordon.

The English Government still believed and hoped that Palmer has escaped;

and on October 17th it sent a telegram to Burton bidding him go and

assist in the search for his old friend.

Like the war horse in the Bible, the veteran traveller shouted "Aha!"

and he shot across the Mediterranean like a projectile from a cannon.

But he had no sooner reached Suez than he heard--his usual luck--that

Sir Charles Warren, with 200 picked men, was scouring the peninsula, and

that consequently his own services would not be required. In six

weeks he was back again at Trieste and so ended Viator's [375] last

expedition. The remains of Palmer and his two companions were discovered

by Sir Charles and sent to England to be interred in St. Paul's

Cathedral. To Palmer's merits as a man Burton paid glowing tributes; and

he praised, too, Palmer's works, especially The Life of Harun Al Raschid

and the translations of Hafiz, [376] Zoheir and the Koran. Of the last

Mr. Stanley Lane-Poole says finely: It "has the true desert ring

in it;.. the translator has carried us among the Bedawin tents, and

breathed into us the strong air of the desert, till we fancy we can

hear the rich voice of the Blessed Prophet himself as he spoke to the

pilgrims on Akabah."

In his letter to Payne of 23rd December 1882, Burton adumbrates a visit

eastward. "After January," he says, "I shall run to the Greek Islands,

and pick up my forgotten modern Greek." He was unable, however, to carry

out his plans in their entirety. On January 15th he thanks Payne for

the loan of the "Uncastrated Villon," [377] and the Calcutta and Breslau

editions of the Nights, and says "Your two vols. of Breslau and last

proofs reached me yesterday. I had written to old Quaritch for a loan of

the Breslau edition. He very sensibly replied by ignoring the loan and

sending me a list of his prices. So then the thing dropped. What is

the use of paying L3 odd for a work that would be perfectly useless to

me.... But he waxes cannier every year."

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