CHAPTER I

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NEWSPAPER WRITING

AND EDITING

BY

WILLARD GROSVENOR BLEYER, PH.D.

CHAIRMAN OF THE COURSE IN JOURNALISM, AND

ASSOCIATE PROFESSOR OF JOURNALISM IN

THE UNIVERSITY OF WISCONSIN

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BOSTON NEW YORK CHICAGO SAN FRANCISCO

HOUGHTON MIFFLIN COMPANY

The Riverside Press Cambridge

COPYRIGHT, 1913, BY WILLARD GROSVENOR BLEYER

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

The Riverside Press

CAMBRIDGE, MASSACHUSETTS

PRINTED IN THE U. S. A.

TO

A. H. B.

PREFACE

Seven years’ experience in trying to train college students in methods

of newspaper writing and editing has convinced the author of the need

of text-books in journalism. Newspapers themselves supply the student

with so miscellaneous a collection of good, bad, and mediocre work

that, with an uncritical taste, he does not always discriminate in

the character of the models which he selects to imitate. Lectures by

experienced editors and writers, although fruitful of much inspiration

and general information, seldom give the student sufficiently specific

and detailed directions to guide him in his daily work. What he needs

is a handbook containing typical examples of all of the kinds of

newspaper work that he is likely to be called upon to do during the

first years of his newspaper experience. These examples should be

carefully selected from well-edited newspapers and should be analyzed

to show the fundamental principles that underlie their construction.

With such a book illustrative of current practices in newspaper

making, he can study more intelligently the newspapers themselves and

can assimilate more completely the advice and information given by

newspaper men in active service. Furthermore, such a book, by giving

specific suggestions with examples of their application, serves as a

guide to aid the student in overcoming his difficulties as he does his

work from day to day. It is to furnish a handbook and guide of this

kind that the present text-book has been prepared.

This book is adapted both for use in college classes in journalism and

for study by persons interested in journalism who are not attending

college. The needs of these two groups are not essentially different.

Both desire to know the basic principles of newspaper writing and

editing and to get the necessary training in the application of these

fundamental principles to their own work. In each chapter, accordingly,

explanation and exemplification are supplemented by material for

practice work.

To formulate a large number of rules for the writing of news stories,

the editing of copy, the writing of headlines, and other kinds of

newspaper work, is plainly impossible, even if it were desirable.

Methods of newspaper making during the last fifty years have undergone

so constant and rapid a readjustment to new conditions in the

transmission of news, in mechanical production, and in the sources

of income, that only a few traditions have remained unchanged. The

tireless effort to secure novelty and variety in present-day journalism

prevents the news story or the headline from becoming absolutely fixed

in form or style. Instead of attempting to formulate dogmatic rules

and directions, the author has undertaken to analyze current methods

of newspaper work with the purpose of showing the reasons for them

and the causes which have produced them. The examples selected to

illustrate these methods have been taken from newspapers in all parts

of the country and are intended to represent the general practices now

prevailing. For obvious reasons names and addresses in most of these

stories have been changed. To retain the newspaper form as far as

possible, the examples have been printed between rules in column width.

Inasmuch as this book is intended to prepare the student for the

kind of work which he is likely to do during the first years of

his newspaper experience, it does not consider editorial writing,

book-reviewing, or musical and dramatic criticism. To discuss these

subjects adequately would require more space than a handbook on

reporting and editing permits.

It is assumed throughout this book that the student of journalism is

familiar with the elementary principles of grammar and rhetoric, and

has had sufficient training in composition to be able to express ideas

in simple, correct English. Faults in such rudimentary matters as

grammar, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization are not considered

at all. No attention is given to diction or questions of good usage.

All these matters are fully treated in numerous books on English

composition.

In the discussion of the news story, an emphasis has been given to

the “lead” that may seem disproportionate. This has been done in

the belief that the rapidity with which newspapers are generally

read makes the beginning the most important part of the story. The

average reader gleans the significant facts of each piece of news

from the headlines and the first paragraphs. He expects in the “lead”

the “feature” as well as the gist of the news. To the student this

problem of massing skillfully, in a compact and interesting form, the

substance of his material, is a new one, and he must be shown all

the varied possibilities of this treatment. The author has not been

unmindful of the fact that efforts are being made to break away from

the “gist-of-the-news” beginning, and has given examples of other

forms. For stories in which entertainment rather than information is

the purpose, beginnings that do not summarize may undoubtedly be used

to advantage. In such stories the student must be shown how to arouse

the reader’s interest and curiosity in the first sentences so that he

will read further.

The function of the newspaper has been discussed at some length

in order to call the student’s attention to the importance of the

newspaper as an influence in a democratic government and to point out

the significance of his own work in relation to society. An effort has

been made to analyze the problems of newspaper making in order to show

the fundamental issues involved. The purpose has been, not to settle

these questions dogmatically, but to stimulate the student to think for

himself.

“Newspaper English” has so long been regarded by many teachers of

English as a term of reproach, and instruction in journalistic writing

has been so recently introduced into the college curriculum, that some

English instructors still question the value of systematic training

of students in newspaper writing as a part of the teaching of English

composition. Nevertheless, every teacher of English in the secondary

schools and colleges recognizes the fact that one of the most serious

weaknesses of present-day training in composition is the lack of a

definite aim for the student in his writing, and a corresponding lack

of interest on his part in doing work that has no real purpose. To

report actual events for publication, either in a local newspaper or

in a school paper, gives the student both material and purpose, and to

that extent increases his interest and his desire to write well. If

the application of the principles of English composition to newspaper

writing and editing can be demonstrated to the student, as the author

has attempted to do in this book, the student can undoubtedly be given

valuable practice in these principles through systematic training in

newspaper work.

“Every professor of journalism must write a textbook on journalism in

order to justify his claim to his title,” was the facetious remark made

at the first Conference of Teachers of Journalism. Until journalism

has been taught in colleges and universities long enough to have

developed generally accepted methods of instruction, the text-book

produced by every teacher of the subject must be regarded, not as a

demonstration of his claims to the title, but as a contribution to the

development of methods of teaching based on his own experience. If this

book is of assistance to those who aspire to become newspaper workers

or to those who are undertaking to train students of journalism, it

will have accomplished its purpose.

The author is indebted to the publishers of _Collier’s Weekly_, of the

_American Magazine_, and of the _Independent_ for permission to reprint

material from these magazines. Acknowledgment is also due to the many

newspapers throughout the country from which examples have been taken

and to which due credit has been given whenever the “stories” thus

reproduced have been important or distinctive in character.

The facsimile newspaper headings reproduced in this book represent

styles of type used in newspaper offices throughout the country. These

specimens are included by courtesy of the Mergenthaler Linotype Company

of New York.

UNIVERSITY OF WISCONSIN,

MADISON, March 3, 1913.

CONTENTS

I. HOW A NEWSPAPER IS MADE 1

II. NEWS AND NEWS VALUES 17

III. GETTING THE NEWS 29

IV. STRUCTURE AND STYLE IN NEWS STORIES 60

V. NEWS STORIES OF UNEXPECTED OCCURRENCES 101

VI. SPEECHES, INTERVIEWS, AND TRIALS 126

VII. SPECIAL KINDS OF NEWS 161

VIII. FOLLOW UP AND REWRITE STORIES 194

IX. FEATURE STORIES 211

X. EDITING COPY 255

XI. THE WRITING OF HEADLINES 271

XII. PROOF-READING 315

XIII. MAKING UP THE PAPER 322

XIV. THE FUNCTION OF THE NEWSPAPER 331

INDEX 361

NEWSPAPER WRITING

AND EDITING

CHAPTER I

HOW A NEWSPAPER IS MADE

=Newspaper Production.= To furnish for a cent or two a fairly complete

record of important events that take place in any corner of the

world, editorial comment, market quotations, reviews of new books,

critiques of plays and concerts, fashion hints, cooking recipes,

cartoons, and illustrations, as well as advertisements of all kinds,

would seem a stupendous, not to say impossible, task if it were not

an everyday phenomenon. A single copy of a daily newspaper in a large

city contains, exclusive of advertising, from 60,000 to 80,000 words,

or as many as does the average novel. These metropolitan papers print

from 100,000 to 900,000 copies each day, numbers far in excess of

the editions of most successful novels. While it takes the novelist

months to produce his work, and his publishers months to print it,

the newspaper is made and printed in from one to ten editions within

twenty-four hours.

The successful achievement of such an undertaking, day by day, requires

extensive equipment and effective organization. The rapid production of

a large edition demands many expensive machines to transform written

matter quickly into type, and huge presses to print the papers at the

highest speed. Furthermore, it makes necessary a large staff to gather

and prepare news and other reading matter, a large force to put this

material into type, to print it, and to distribute the papers, besides

managers and clerks to carry on the many business transactions involved

in so big an enterprise.

=Newspaper Organization.= Although in its main divisions the

organization of newspaper publishing is essentially the same, the

size of a paper determines to a considerable extent the number of

employees and the degree of division of labor among them, as well as

the character and the extent of the equipment. On large papers where

many men are employed and many editions are printed daily, there needs

must be considerable specialization in editing and reporting; while on

small papers the size of the staff requires that each man perform a

variety of tasks. Sometimes conditions of ownership or control, and on

older papers office traditions, modify the usual duties and authority

of different members of the staff.

No one form of organization that can be described in detail, therefore,

will apply to all newspaper offices even when they are of the same

relative size, but a composite type of organization for large

newspapers may be explained to show the division of work.

Newspaper publishing consists of three distinct parts with three

entirely different classes of workers: (1) the business management, (2)

the mechanical force, (3) the editorial staff.

=The Business Management.= The business organization, as its name

implies, has charge of the commercial side of newspaper publishing.

From the financial point of view the purpose of the newspaper is to

make enough money to maintain the paper and to pay dividends to the

stockholders. The object of the business department is to sell as much

advertising space and as many copies of each issue as it possibly

can; and, on the other hand, to pay out for wages and expenses only

so much as is necessary to keep the paper up to a standard that will

insure a good circulation and enough advertising. In short, a newspaper

company, regarded purely in the light of a business enterprise, is not

essentially different from any manufacturing company that produces and

sells a commodity.

The business department is organized with a business manager at its

head, who has complete control of the finances of the paper, subject,

of course, to the owner or board of directors of the company. Under

him are: (1) the circulation manager, (2) the advertising manager, (3)

the cashier. The circulation manager directs the work of subscription

canvassers, the drivers and the assistants on the paper’s distributing

wagons, the mailing clerks and helpers, and a force of office clerks

and bookkeepers. In the advertising department are the advertising

solicitors and the office clerks and bookkeepers. The cashier has

assistants and a bookkeeper to aid him. The business office of the

newspaper is frequently referred to as the “counting room.”

=The Mechanical Force.= The mechanical side of newspaper making is

divided into three relatively distinct departments: (1) the composing

room, where, under the direction of a foreman and a copy-cutter, the

type is set up by compositors or is cast in linotype or monotype

machines by operators, and where the type is arranged by make-up men

in pages as it is to appear in print; (2) the stereotyping room, where

these pages of type are used to make molds into which lead plates are

cast by stereotypers under the direction of the foreman of the room;

(3) the press-room, where the papers are printed, in charge of a

superintendent with pressmen and machinists as his assistants. Attached

to the composing room is the proof-reading department with a head

proof-reader, several assistant readers, and as many copy-holders who

read aloud the copy for the proof which is to be corrected.

=The Editorial Staff.= The writing and editing of a newspaper, with

which this book is particularly concerned, is divided into two distinct

parts: (1) the gathering, the writing, and the editing of the news;

and (2) the interpreting of the news. The two branches are different

in the kind of work involved, and are relatively independent in the

organization of the office. To present clear, concise, accurate,

timely, and interesting reports, or “stories” as they are called, of

everything that is going on in the world of sufficient importance to

be of interest to any considerable number of readers, is the aim of

the news department. The more quickly, the more attractively, the more

completely the news can be presented, the greater is considered the

success of the newspaper from the point of view of the news staff.

The editorials of a newspaper attempt to interpret and to explain the

news, or to make the news the basis of argument upon issues growing

out of questions of the day. The attitude taken by a newspaper on the

questions at issue is determined by what is known as its “editorial

policy.”

The editor-in-chief, under whom are one or more editorial writers, has

charge of the editorial columns and determines the editorial policy,

subject to whatever control of this policy the owner or directors

desire to exercise. The editorial writers and the editor-in-chief

confer daily to consider the attitude that the paper shall take in

its editorials and to divide the work of writing them. Some of the

editorials are written by men in other professions who are not on the

regular staff, and often by such members of the news staff as the

financial editor or the dramatic critic. Most of the editorials,

however, are the work of the editorial writers.

The news staff is in charge of the managing editor, who is usually

responsible directly to the owner or the directors. As aids the

managing editor has the assistant managing editor, and the news editor,

or the night editor, to take charge of “making up” the newspaper The

gathering and writing of local news is in charge of the city editor

and the night city editor, with an assistant city editor. The news of

the state, the nation, and the world, as it comes by mail, telegraph,

and telephone, is under the control of the telegraph editor. The city

editor directs the reporters; the telegraph editor the correspondents.

Particular kinds of news are collected and edited by persons in

especially designated positions, such as the sporting editor, the

society editor, the financial and market editor, the dramatic and

musical editor, the real estate editor, the railroad editor, the marine

editor, the labor editor, all of whom usually work under the direction

of the managing editor. The special magazine sections of the Saturday

or the Sunday issues are in charge of the magazine, or Sunday, editor.

An exchange editor goes over all the newspapers received in exchange

to clip and edit material worth reprinting. Cartoonists, artists, and

photographers supply the materials for newspaper illustrations, or

“cuts,” as they are called. A librarian has charge of the reference

books and newspaper files, as well as of the collection of biographical

sketches and portraits of prominent people known as the “morgue.”

All of the manuscript, or “copy,” is edited and is supplied with

headlines at the copy desk in charge of a head copy-reader with a

number of copy-readers as assistants. “Rewrite men” are often employed

to take the facts of a story from another newspaper and rewrite

them, or to receive material over the telephone from reporters and

correspondents and write it up for publication. Unsatisfactory work of

a reporter may be turned over to a rewrite man to be put in the desired

form, for rewrite men must be able to take the raw material of the news

furnished by others and turn it into a well-written news story.

=Getting News into Print.= The relation of all these departments to

one another is best shown by following through the process by which

a piece of news gets into print. The telegraph editor on a newspaper

in the capital city of the state, for example, gets from an office

telegraph operator, a typewritten dispatch signed by the paper’s

correspondent in a city of a neighboring state to the effect that

the attorney-general has dropped dead in the lobby of a hotel. The

telegraph editor at once notifies the city editor so that he may assign

reporters to get the local phases of the piece of news, or “to cover

the local end of the story,” as the newspaper workers say. One reporter

is sent to interview the members of the late attorney-general’s family;

another is dispatched to the governor’s office for an interview with

the governor on the deceased official; a third is asked to look up the

statute concerning such an unexpected vacancy in the office; a fourth

is assigned to find out the probable successor to the position.

After informing the city editor and the managing editor, the telegraph

editor at once turns over the dispatch to the head copy-reader to have

it edited and to have a headline written. Meanwhile one of the rewrite

men is delegated to get a biographical sketch of the attorney-general

from the office “morgue” and to write an obituary. The artist looks

up the half-tone engraving, or “cut,” of the official in the “morgue”

and selects an appropriate border or “frame” in which to put it. The

editor-in-chief is informed of the attorney-general’s death so that he

may make appropriate editorial comment. Meanwhile the telegraph editor

has sent a telegram to the correspondent who furnished the first news

of the event instructing him to “wire” five hundred words more giving

all the particulars.

When the dispatch has been edited and a headline written by one of

the copy-readers, the latter returns it to the head copy-reader, who

glances over it and sends it in a pneumatic tube to the composing room.

The tube delivers it at the copy-cutter’s desk. The copy-cutter glances

at the sheet with the headline for the story, and then at the two pages

of copy. The headline he sends by the copy distributor to the headline

machine to be set up. The two pages of copy he cuts into three pieces

or “takes” so that the story may be set up on three different linotype

machines. If the copy of the whole story were given to one machine

operator, it would take three times as long to get it into type.

Meanwhile some of the reporters have returned from their assignments.

Each one reports what he has found to the city editor, and is told how

long a story to write, and possibly what to emphasize in the beginning,

or “lead.” As each story is finished it is turned over to the city

editor, who glances over it and passes it on to the head copy-reader.

Thence it goes through the same course as the first dispatch.

After the copy of the dispatch has been set up in type, it is taken to

a small hand press, and several impressions called “galley proofs,” or

“proofs,” are printed, or “pulled,” from the type. One of the proofs,

with the original copy, goes to the proof-room to be compared with the

copy and carefully corrected by the proof-readers. Another proof-sheet

is sent to the managing editor, who is responsible for everything

that goes into the paper; a third proof is delivered to the news

editor who arranges, or “makes up,” the news stories on each page of

the paper before it is printed. After the proof-readers have corrected

the proof, and the editors have made any necessary changes in it, the

proof-sheets are returned to the operators so that they may make the

necessary alterations by resetting whatever is changed. From the type

thus corrected a second set of proofs, called the “revise,” is printed

and these are distributed to the editors as the first were. The type is

then ready to be used in the process of printing the paper.

Half an hour or more before an edition is to be printed, the news

editor gathers the proofs of the news stories that are to be put into

that edition, and goes to the composing room to arrange this news on

the several pages. The importance of the news of the attorney-general’s

death would warrant its being given a prominent place on the first

page. The most prominent position is the right-hand outside column.

If there is no news of greater importance, the news editor directs

the “make-up” men in the composing room to put the type of this story

in the outside column of the first page “form.” The “form” consists

of a “chase,” or steel frame, somewhat larger in inside dimensions

than the page as it appears when printed. Into this “chase,” which

rests upon a smooth iron-top table, the type is arranged between the

brass or lead column rules which make the lines between the columns of

type. The advertisements are placed in the forms under the direction

of the advertising department just as the news matter is put in under

the direction of the news editor, the page and position on the page

usually having been stipulated by the advertiser in making a contract

for a certain “position” for his “ad.” When each page is filled with

type, the whole page is “locked” in the “form” by a series of screws

or wedges (called “quoins”), so that the form may be handled without

letting the type drop out. If the type falls out and gets mixed up, it

is said to be “pied,” and the mixture is called “pi.”

The forms, after being locked, are taken to the stereotyping room where

a paper mold, or matrix, commonly called a “mat,” is made of each page.

These matrices, bent in semicircular form, are placed in a casting box

into which molten lead is poured to make the semicircular lead plates

to be used in printing. In large offices the casting of these plates

is done by placing the matrix in an automatic stereotyping machine,

known as the autoplate, which turns out completed plates in less than

a minute. After the plates have been trimmed and planed on the back to

make them exactly the right thickness, they are ready to be put on the

press.

These semicircular lead plates, which are thus cast in exact

reproduction of the page forms of type, are fastened on the cylinders

of the press. As the cylinders revolve, ink rollers touch the surface

of the plates and ink the projecting letters. The paper from a large

roll, as it passes between the cylinders and the blanket rolls which

press the paper against the inked plates on the cylinders, takes up

the ink and thus has printed on it the impression of the page of type.

Besides printing the pages, the press cuts, folds, and counts the

papers so that the complete newspaper comes from the press ready for

sale or delivery.

As soon as the newspapers are printed, they are turned over to the

circulation department for distribution. Some copies go to the mailing

room to be labeled with little orange-colored address slips and to be

put into the mail sacks, in which they are taken to the post office

or mail trains. Other copies are sold to waiting newsboys, and still

others are taken in the company’s wagon to news stands and carriers all

over the city.

Despite the number and variety of these details in the process of

newspaper making, the news of the death of the attorney-general would

reach the readers in a comparatively short time after the event

occurred. In half an hour from the time the last piece of copy is

written, a complete newspaper containing it is printed and ready for

distribution.

=Speed of Production.= The invention and the perfection of various

mechanical devices used in newspaper making have made possible this

great speed. In the front rank of ingenious pieces of machinery that

have added greatly to rapidity in newspaper publishing stands the

linotype. This machine, which casts solid lines of type, or “slugs”

as they are called, has increased four-fold the speed of production

and has made possible much larger editions. The monotype, which casts

each type separately, has also proved a valuable addition to the means

of turning “copy” into type quickly. For the casting of semicircular

stereotype plates the autoplate machine is an important time-saving

device. The time required for “running off” an edition is now reduced

from two- to five-fold by making duplicate sets of these stereotype

plates and by putting them on from two to five large presses so that

these presses print the same edition simultaneously.

Improvements in newspaper-printing machinery have resulted in huge

presses that take paper from large rolls and turn out completed

newspapers printed in one or two colors, cut, folded, and counted,

ready for distribution. They can be adjusted to print papers from four

to forty-eight pages in size, and can produce twelve-page papers at

the rate of 144,000 copies an hour. Magazine sections and “comics” are

printed in four colors, usually yellow, red, blue, and black, on large

presses under conditions practically the same as those just described.

In order to insert the latest news without taking the time necessary

to make up new forms, prepare new matrices, and cast new stereotype

plates, a device called the “fudge” is employed. After the first page

form of a late edition has been used to make a matrix, about six inches

of type is taken out from two columns in the lower left hand corner

or the upper right hand corner of the page, and a new matrix and a

stereotype plate are made in which this corner is a blank. This new

plate with the blank space is then put on the press in place of the

regular first page plate. As fast as late news is received, it is set

up on linotype lines, or “slugs,” and these lines are clamped on a

small cylinder in the press. When the paper runs through the press,

these linotype lines on the cylinder are printed, often in red ink, in

the space on the front page left unprinted by the blank in the plate.

To save more time with this device, a telegraph wire is run to the

press room and a linotype machine is installed beside it, so that the

latest news can be cast on linotype “slugs” and put on the “fudge”

cylinder as fast as the reports are received by telegraph. Results of

baseball games, races, and other sporting events can be printed to

advantage by means of the “fudge.”

Recently a mailing machine has been introduced that folds, wraps, and

addresses each copy separately as fast as papers are fed into it.

In no other process of manufacture that is as complicated as newspaper

making, it is safe to say, has equal speed of production been attained.

=Handling a Big Story.= The scene in a metropolitan newspaper office

following the receipt of the first news of the “Titanic” disaster,

as graphically portrayed by an editor of a New York morning paper,

illustrates the conditions under which important news, received late,

is hurried into print.[1] The account in part is as follows:

At 1:20 a.m. Monday, April 15, [1912], the cable editor opened

an envelope of the Associated Press that had stamped on its face

“Bulletin.” This is what he read:

Cape Race, N. F., Sunday night, April 14.—At 10:25 o’clock

tonight the White Star Line steamship “Titanic” called “C. Q.

D.” to the Marconi station here, and reported having struck

an iceberg. The steamer said that immediate assistance was

required.

The cable editor looked at his watch. It was 1:20 and lacked just

five minutes of the hour when the mail edition goes to press.

“Boy!” he called sharply.

An office boy was at his side in a moment.

“Send this upstairs; tell them the head is to come; double column,

and tell the night editor to rip open two columns on the first page

for a one-stick dispatch of the ‘Titanic’ striking an iceberg and

sinking.”

Every one in the office was astir in a moment and came over to see

the cable editor write on a sheet of copy paper the following head

[which he indicated was to be set up in this form]:

TITANIC SINKING

IN MID-OCEAN; HIT

GREAT ICEBERG

“Boy!” he called again; but it was not necessary—a boy in a newspaper

office knows news the first time he sees it.

“Tell them that’s the head for the ‘Titanic.’”

Then he wrote briefly this telegraphic dispatch, and as he did so he

said to another office boy at his side: “Tell the operator to shut

off that story he is taking and get me a clear wire to Montreal.”

This is what he wrote to the Montreal correspondent, probably at work

at his desk in a Montreal newspaper office at that hour:

Cape Race says White Star Liner “Titanic” struck iceberg, is

sinking and wants immediate assistance. Rush every line you can

get. We will hold open for you until 3:30.

“Give that to the operator and find out if we caught the mail on that

‘Titanic’ dispatch,” he said quickly to the boy.

In a moment the boy returned.

“O.K. on both,” he said.

The city editor, who had just put on his coat previous to going away

for the night, took it off. The night city editor, at the head of the

copy-desk, where all the local copy (as a reporter’s story is called)

is read, and the telegraph editor stood together, joined later by

the night editor, for the mail edition had left the composing room

for the stereotypers and then to the pressroom and from thence to be

scattered wherever on the globe newspapers find readers.

The “Titanic” staff was immediately organized, for at that hour most

of the staff were still at work. The city editor took the helm.

“Get the papers for April 11—all of them,” he said to the head office

boy, “and then send word to the art department to quit everything to

make three cuts, which I shall send right down.”

Then to the night city editor: “Get up a story of the vessel itself;

some of the stuff they sent us the other day that we did not use,

and I ordered it put in the envelope. Play up the mishap at the

start. Get up a passenger list story and an obituary of Smith, her

commander.”

There was no mention of Smith in the dispatch, but city editors

retain such things in their heads for immediate use, and this

probably explains in a measure why they hold down their job; also

having, it might be added, executive judgment, which is sometimes

right.

“Assign somebody to the White Star Line and see what they’ve got.”

The night city editor went back to the circular table where the seven

or eight men who read reporters’ copy were gathered.

“Get up as much as you can of the passenger list of the ‘Titanic.’

She is sinking off Newfoundland,” he said briefly to one.

And to another: “Write me a story of the ‘Titanic,’ the new White

Star liner, on her maiden trip, telling of her mishap with the ‘New

York’ at the start.”

And to another: “Write me a story of Captain E. J. Smith.”

Then to a reporter sitting idly about: “Get your hat and coat quick;

go down to the White Star Line office and telephone all you can about

the ‘Titanic’ sinking off Newfoundland.”

Then to another reporter: “Get the White Star Line on the phone and

find out what they’ve got of the sinking of the ‘Titanic.’ Find out

who is the executive head in New York; his address and telephone

number.”

And in another part of the room the city editor was saying to the

office boy: “Get me all the ‘Titanic’ pictures you have and a photo

or cut of Captain E. J. Smith.”

Two boys instantly went to work, for the photos of men are kept

separate from the photographs of inanimate things. The city editor

selected three:

“Tell the art department to make a three-column cut of the ‘Titanic,’

a two-column of the interior, and a two-column of Smith.”

In the mean time the Associated Press bulletins came in briefly.

Paragraph by paragraph the cable editor was sending the story to the

composing room. What was going on upstairs every one knew. They were

sidetracking everything else, and the copy-cutter in the composing

room was sending out the story in “takes,” as they are called, of

a single paragraph to each compositor. His blue pencil marked each

individual piece of copy with a letter and number, so that when the

dozen or so men setting up the story had their work finished, the

story might be put together consecutively.

“Tell the operator,” said the cable editor again to the office boy,

“to duplicate that dispatch I gave him to our Halifax man. Get his

name out of the correspondents’ book.”

“Who wrote that story of the ‘“Carmania” in the Icefield’?” said the

night city editor to the copy-reader who “handled” the homecoming of

the “Carmania,” which arrived Sunday night and the story of which was

already in the mail edition of the paper before him. The copy-reader

told him. He called the reporter to his desk.

“Take that story,” said the night city editor, “and give us a column

on it. Don’t rewrite the story; add paragraphs here and there to

show the vast extent of the icefield. Make it straight copy, so that

nothing in that story will have to be reset. You have just thirty

minutes to catch the edition. Write it in twenty.”

“Get the passenger lists of the ‘Olympic’ and the ‘Baltic,’” was the

assignment given to another reporter, all alert waiting for their

names to be called, every man awake at the switch.

In the mean time, the story from the Montreal man was being ticked

off; on another wire Halifax was coming to life.

“Men,” said the city editor, “we have just five minutes left to make

the city [edition]. Jam it down tight.”

Already the three cuts had been made, the telegraph editor was

handling the Montreal story, his assistant the Halifax end, and the

cable editor was still editing the Associated Press bulletins and

writing a new head to tell the rest of the story that the additional

details brought. The White Star Line man had a list of names of

passengers of the “Titanic” and found that they numbered 1300, and

that she carried a crew of 860.

In the mean time proofs of all the “Titanic” matter that had been

set were coming to the desk of the managing editor, in charge over

all, but giving special attention to the editorial matter. All his

suggestions went through the city editor, and on down the line, but

he himself went from desk to desk overlooking the work.

“Time’s up,” said the city editor; but before he finished, the cable

editor cried to the boy: “Let the two-column head stand and tell them

to add this head:”

At 12:27 this Morning Blurred Signals by Wireless Told of Women

Being Put off in Lifeboats—Three Lines Rushing to Aid of 1300

Imperiled Passengers and Crew of 860 Men.

“Did we catch it?” asked the cable editor of the boy standing at the

composing-room tube.

“We did,” he said triumphantly.

“One big pull for the last [edition], men,” said the city editor. “We

are going in at 3:20. Let’s beat the town with a complete paper.”

The enthusiasm was catching fire. Throughout the office it was a

bedlam of noise—clicking typewriters, clicking telegraph instruments,

and telephone bells ringing added to the whistle of the tubes that

lead from the city room to the composing room, the pressroom, the

stereotype room and the business office, the latter, happily, not in

use, but throughout the office men worked; nobody shouted, no one

lost his head; men were flushed, but the cool, calm, deliberate way

in which the managing editor smoked his cigar helped much to relieve

the tension.

“Three-fifteen, men,” said the city editor, admonishingly; “every

line must be up by 3:20. Five minutes more.”

The city editor walked rapidly from desk to desk.

“All up,” said the night city editor, “and three minutes to the good.”

At the big table stood the city editor, cable editor, night city

editor, and managing editor. They were looking over the completed

headline that should tell the story to the world.

“That will hold ’em, I guess,” said the city editor, and the head

went upstairs.

The men waited about and talked and smoked. Bulletins came in, but

with no important details. Going to press at 3:20 meant a wide

circulation. At 4:30 the Associated Press sent “Good-night,” but at

that hour the presses had been running uninterruptedly for almost an

hour.

SUGGESTIONS

1. Find out all that you can about the organization of the paper on

which you are employed.

2. Know the names, at least, of the heads of all the departments.

3. Learn as much as possible about advertising and subscription rates

and methods.

4. Familiarize yourself with the details of all the mechanical

processes connected with newspaper making.

5. Interest yourself in the welfare of the paper as if it were your own

property.

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