V.iii.65 (127,1)

[Our own love, waking, cries to see what's done,

While shameful hate sleeps out the afternoon]

These two lines I should be glad to call _an interpolation of a

player_. They are ill connected with the former, and not very

clear or proper in themselves. I believe the author made two

couplets to the same purpose, wrote them both down that he might

take his choice, and so they happened to be both preserved.

For _sleep_ I think we should read _slept_. _Love cries_ to see what

was done while hatred _slept_, and suffered mischief to be done. Or

the meaning may be, that _hatred_ still _continues_ to _sleep_ at ease,

while _love_ is weeping; and so the present reading may stand.

V.iii.93 (128,3) [In Florence was it from a casement thrown me]

Bertram still continues to have too little virtue to deserve Helen.

He did not know indeed that it was Helen's ring, but he knew that

he had it not from a window.

V.iii.95 (128,4) [Noble she was, and thought I stood engag'd]

[T: I don't understand this reading; if we are to understand, that she

thought Bertram engag'd to her in affection, insnared by her

charms, this meaning is too obscurely express'd.] The context rather

makes me believe, that the poet wrote,

_noble she was, and thought

I stood_ ungag'd;-----

i.e. unengag'd: neither my heart, nor person, dispos'd of.--The

plain meaning is, when she saw me receive the ring, she thought me

_engaged_ to her.

V.iii.101 (129,5) [_King_ Plutus himself , That knows the tinct and

multiplying medicine] Plutus the grand alchemist, who knows the

_tincture_ which confers the properties of gold upon base metals, and

the _matter_ by which _gold_ is _multiplied_, by which a small quantity

of gold is made to communicate its qualities to a large mass of metal.

In the reign of Henry the fourth a law was made to forbid _all

men thenceforth to_ multiply _gold, or use any craft of_ multiplication.

Of which law Mr. Boyle, when he was warm with the hope of

transmutation, procured a repeal.

V.iii.105 (129,6) [Then if you know, That you are well acquainted

with yourself] The true meaning of this _strange_ [Warburton's word]

expression is, _If you know that_ your faculties are so found, as

_that you have the proper consciousness of your own actions_, and

are able to recollect and relate what you have done, _tell me_. &c.

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