V.ii.517 (454,6)

[That sport best pleases, that doth least know how.

Where zeal strives to content, and the contents

Dies in the zeal of that which it presents]

The third line may be read better thus,

--_the contents_

_Die in the zeal of_ him _which_ them _presents_.

This sentiment of the Princess is very natural, but less generous

than that of the Amazonian Queen, who says, on a like occasion,

in Midsummer-Night's Dream,

_I love not to see wretchedness o'ercharg'd_,

_Nor duty in his service perishing_.

V.ii.547 (455,8) [A bare throw at novum] This passage I do not understand.

I fancy that _novum_ should be _novem_, and that some allusion

is intended between the play of _nine pins_ and the play of the _nine_

worthies, but it lies too deep for my investigation.

V.ii.581 (457,2) [A-jax] There is a conceit of _Ajax_ and _a jakes_.

V.ii.694 (461,4) [more Ates] That is, more instigation. Ate was

the mischievous goddess that incited bloodshed.

V.ii.702 (461,5) [my arms] The weapons and armour which he wore in

the character of Pompey.

V.ii.744 (463,8) [In the converse of breath] Perhaps _converse_ may,

in this line, mean _interchange_.

V.ii.755 (464,2) [which fain it would convince] We must read,

--_which fain_ would it _convince_;

that is, the entreaties of love which would fain _over-power_ grief.

So Lady Macbeth declares, _That she will_ convince _the chamberlain

with wine_.

V.ii.762 (464,3) [Honest plain words best pierce the ear of grief]

As it seems not very proper for Biron to court the princess for

the king in the king's presence, at this critical moment, I

believe the speech is given to a wrong person. I read thus,

Prin. _I understand you not, my griefs are double:

Honest plain words best pierce the ear of grief._

King. _And by these badges_, &c.

V.ii.779 (465,4) [Suggested us] That is, _tempted_ us.

V.ii.790 (465,5) [As bombast, and as lining to the time] This line

is obscure. _Bombast_ was a kind of loose texture not unlike what

is now called wadding, used to give the dresses of that time bulk

and protruberance, without much increase of weight; whence the

same name is given a tumour of words unsupported by solid

sentiment. The Princess, therefore, says, that they considered this

courtship as but _bombast_, as something to fill out life, which

not being closely united with it, might be thrown away at pleasure.

V.ii.795 (466,7) [We did not quote them so] [We should read, _quote_,

esteem, reckon. Warburton] though our old writers spelling by

the ear, probably wrote _cote_, as it was pronounced. (see 1765,

II,218,5)

V.ii.823 (467,8) [To flatter up these powers of mine with rest] Dr.

Warburton would read _fetter_, but _flatter_ or _sooth_ is, in my

opinion, more apposite to the king's purpose than _fetter_. Perhaps we

may read,

_To flatter_ on _these_ hours of time _with rest_;

That is, I would not deny to live in the hermitage, to make the

year of delay pass in quiet.

V.ii.873 (469,2) [dear groans] _Dear_ should here, as in many other

places, be _dere_, sad, odious.

V.ii.904 (470,3) [_When daisies pied, and violets blue_] The first

lines of this song that were transposed, have been replaced by

Mr. Theobald.

V.ii.907 (470,5) [_Do paint the meadows with delight_] [W: much

bedight] Much less elegant than the present reading.

(472,7) General Observation. In this play, which all the editors

have concurred to censure, and some have rejected as unworthy of him.

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