EXERCISE - Slovenliness III

Replace with more original expressions the trite phrases (italicized)

in the following sentences:

_Last but not least_, we have _in our midst_ one who began life

_poor but honest_.

After we had _done justice to a dinner_ and gathered in the drawing

room, we listened _with bated breath_ while she _favored us with a

selection_.

_A goodly number_ of _the fair sex_, perceiving that _the

psychological moment_ had come, _applauded him to the echo_.

We were _doomed to disappointment; the grim reaper_ had already

gathered unto himself _all that was mortal_ of our comrade.

_No sooner said than done_. I soon found myself _the proud

possessor_ of that for which I had acknowledged _a long-felt

want_.

After _the last sad rites_ were over and her body was _consigned to

earth_, we began talking _along these lines_.

With _a few well-chosen words_ he _brought order out of chaos_.

The way my efforts were _nipped in the bud_ simply _beggars

description_. I am somewhat _the worse for wear. Hoping you are the

same_, I remain Yours sincerely, Ned Burke.

Finally, to the extent that you use slang at all, be its master instead of

its slave. You have many times been told that the overuse of slang

disfigures one's speech and hampers his standing with cultivated people.

You have also been told that slang constantly changes, so that one's

accumulations of it today will be a profitless clutter tomorrow. These

things are true, but an even more cogent objection remains. Slang is

detrimental to the formation of good intellectual habits. From its very

nature it cannot be precise, cannot discriminate closely. It is a vehicle

for loose-thinking people, it is fraught with unconsidered general

meanings, it moves in a region of mental mists. It could not flourish as

it does were fewer of us content to express vague thoughts and feelings

instead of those which are sharply and specifically ours. Unless,

therefore, you wish your intellectual processes to be as hazy and

haphazard as those of mental shirkers and loafers, you must eschew, not

necessarily all slang, but all heedless, all habitual use of it. Now and

then a touch of slang, judiciously chosen, is effective; now and then it

fulfils a legitimate purpose of language. But normally you should express

yourself as befits one who has at his disposal the rich treasuries of the

dictionary instead of a mere stock of greasy counterfeit phrases.

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