THE ESSENTIALS OF GOOD COMPOSITION

There are three things necessary in every kind of composition, and these

are order, correction, and number.

_1. Order_

We shall speak first of order, which applies to words considered

separately or joined together. In regard to the former, care must be

taken that there be no decrease by adding a weaker word to a stronger,

as accusing one of sacrilege, and giving him afterward the name of

thief; or adding the character of wanton fellow to that of a highwayman.

The sense ought to increase and rise, which Cicero observes admirably

where he says: "And thou, with that voice, those lungs, and that

gladiator-like vigor of thy whole body." Here each succeeding thing is

stronger than the one before; but if he had begun with the whole body,

he could not with propriety have descended to the voice and lungs. There

is another natural order in saying men and women, day and night, east

and west.

Words in prose not being measured, as are the feet which compose verse,

they are, therefore, transferred from place to place, that they may be

joined where they best fit, as in a building where the irregularity,

however great, of rough stones is both suitable and proper. The happiest

composition language can have, however, is to keep to a natural order,

just connection, and a regularly flowing cadence.

Sometimes there is something very striking about a word. Placed in the

middle of a sentence, it might pass unnoticed, or be obscured by the

other words that lie about it, but when placed at the end the auditor

can not help noting it and retaining it in his mind.

_2. Connection_

Juncture follows, which is equally requisite in words, articles,

members, and periods, all these having their beauty and faults, in

consequence of their manner of connection. It may be a general

observation that in the placing of syllables, their sound will be

harsher as they are pronounced with a like or different gaping of the

mouth. This, however, is not to be dreaded as a signal fault, and I know

not which is worse here, inattention or too great care. Too scrupulous

fear must damp the heat and retard the impetuosity of speaking, while

at the same time it prevents the mind from attending to thoughts which

are of greater moment. As, therefore, it is carelessness to yield to

these faults, so it is meanness to be too much afraid of them.

_3. Number_

Numbers are nowhere so much lacking, nor so remarkable, as at the end of

periods; first, because every sense has its bounds, and takes up a

natural space, by which it is divided from the beginning of what

follows: next, because the hearers following the flow of words, and

drawn, as it were, down the current of the oration, are then more

competent judges, when that impetuosity ceases and gives time for

reflection. There should not, therefore, be anything harsh nor abrupt in

that ending, which seems calculated for the respite and recreation of

the mind and ear. This, too, is the resting-place of the oration, this

the auditor expects, and here burst forth all his effusions of praise.

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