Diffuseness

This sometimes helps, as, for instance, when the subject is hard; words

that may be, strictly speaking, unnecessary still may make things easier

for the reader by giving him more time to master the thought while his

eye is running over the verbiage. So, a little water may prevent a

strong drink from burning throat and stomach. A style that is too terse

is as fatiguing as one that is too diffuse. But when a passage is

written a little long, with consciousness and compunction but still

deliberately, as what will probably be most easy for the reader, it can

hardly be called diffuse.

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