Fifteen men on the Dead Man's Chest,

Yo-ho-ho and a bottle of rum!

Drink and the devil had done for the rest,

Yo-ho-ho and a bottle of rum!

We wrapped 'em all in a mainsail tight

With twice ten turns of a hawser's bight,

And we heaved 'em over and out of sight

With a yo-heave-ho and a fare-ye-well,

And a sullen plunge in a sullen swell,

Ten fathoms along on the road to hell--

Yo-ho-ho and a bottle of rum!

[12] To observe liberties taken with the text, compare these verses

with authentic version.

* * * * *

_September 20, 1914._

Who that loves tales of adventure, thrilling yarns involving the

search for mysteriously lost treasure, has not gloried in "Treasure

Island"? And who that recalls STEVENSON's stirring romance does not

involuntarily chant to himself the ridiculous but none the leas

fascinating verse commencing

"Fifteen men on the Dead Man's Chest--"

as if the gruesome rhyme were in a way intended as a sort of

refrain for the entire story? When we were younger we undoubtedly

speculated on the amazing capacity of this particular dead man's

chest, and we gloated over the uncanny wickedness of the whole

affair. The verse, however, turns out to be one of those

curiosities of literature which is unearthed every now and then by

some industrious contributor to the "Query Page" of THE NEW YORK

TIMES BOOK REVIEW. In this number of the latter the entire song or

"chantey" is given, copied from an old scrapbook, and while it can

hardly be recommended as a delectable piece of literature, in any

sense, it is interesting, aside from its Stevensonian connection,

as a bit of rough, unstudied sailor's jingle, the very authorship

of which is long since forgotten. And the youthful myth of the Dead

Man's Chest--that, too, it appears, is not at all the thing that

fancy painted it. The real Dead Man's Chest, however, as "W. L."

explains it, is quite as alluring as the imaginary one and will

appeal to the student of geographical peculiarities in the West

Indies.

* * * * *

_October 4, 1914._

"FIFTEEN MEN ON THE DEAD MAN'S CHEST"

_New York Times Review of Books_:

The fine old sea poem, "Fifteen Men on the Dead Man's Chest,"

recently quoted in your columns, was written by Younge E. Allison.

I have raked through various biographical dictionaries trying to

discover who Younge E. Allison was, but without results. The man

who wrote such a poem should not be unknelled, unhonored, and

unsung. In your editorial touching the rhyme I don't think you do

it justice. You describe it as "a rough, unstudied sailor's

jingle," whereas it is a work of art. Some of the lines are

tremendous, and the whole poem has a haunting quality that never

yet distinguished a mere jingle. I never weary of repeating some of

its sonorous lines.

WALT MASON.

Emporia, Kan., Sept. 24.

EDITORIAL NOTE.--We have received several other letters in which

the authorship of the lines is credited to Mr. Allison, who is a

resident of Louisville, Ky., and the editor of The Insurance Field

of that city. Mr. Allison was at one time a correspondent of

THE NEW YORK TIMES and also has written several books of fiction,

including "The Passing of Major Galbraith." It is not likely,

however, that he wrote the famous old chanty. One of our

correspondents writes that Mr. Allison "reconstructed" the song

some years ago on the first four lines which are quoted in

Stevenson's "Treasure Island."

Our correspondent, "W. L.," who furnished the copy of the song as

published recently in THE BOOK REVIEW says, however, that he copied

the verses from a manuscript written into a book which bears this

title: "Tales of the Ocean and Essays for the Forecastle,

Containing Matters and Incidents Humorous, Pathetic, Romantic, and

Sentimental, by Hawser Martingale, Boston, Printed and Published by

S. W. Dickinson, 52 Washington St., 1843." This book belonged to

his grandfather, who died in 1874, and the song was familiar to "W.

L." in his youth as early as 1870.

In a letter to W. E. Henley, dated at Braemar, Aug. 25, 1881,

written when Stevenson had begun the writing of "Treasure Island,"

he writes:

I am now on another lay for the moment, purely owing to

Lloyd this one; but I believe there's more coin in it than

in any amount of crawlers. Now see here "The Sea Cook or

Treasure Island: A Story for Boys." [This was the first

title selected for the book.]

If this don't fetch the kids, why, they have gone rotten

since my day. Will you be surprised to learn that it is

about Buccaneers, that it begins in the Admiral Benbow

public house on the Devon coast, that it's all about a map

and a treasure and a mutiny and a derelict ship and a

current and a fine old Squire Trelawney, (the real Tre.

purged of literature and sin to suit the infant mind,) and

a doctor and another doctor and a sea cook with one leg and

and a sea song with a chorus, "Yo-ho-ho and a Bottle of

Rum," (at the third "ho" you heave at the capstan bars,)

which is a real buccaneer's song, only known to the crew of

the late Capt. Flint, who died of rum at Key West much

regretted?

The first publication of "Treasure Island" was in 1883, and in a

letter to Sidney Colvin in July, 1884, Stevenson writes: "'Treasure

Island' came out of Kingsley's 'At Last,' where I got 'The Dead

Man's Chest.'"

* * * * *

THE UNPUBLISHED LETTER

_New York Times Review of Books_,

It has been my great pleasure and satisfaction to sit with Young E.

Allison of Louisville in business intimacy and friendship for many

years, and to have seen the inception of his "Derelict" in three

verses based on Billy Bones' song of "Fifteen Men on the Dead Man's

Chest" from "Treasure Island." During this intimacy also I have

observed those original three stanzas grow to six and viewed the

adjustment and balance and polish he has given to what I now

consider a masterpiece.

No one who ever read "Treasure Island" with a mind, but feels there

is something lacking in Billy Bones' song. It left a haunting wish

for more and if the book was closed with a single regret it was

because Billy Bones had not completed his weird chant. So it

affected Mr. Allison, a confirmed novel reader and a great admirer

of Stevenson. Henry Waller, collaborating with Mr. Allison in the

production[13] of the "Ogallallas" by the Bostonians along back in

1891, declared he had a theme for that swashbuckling chant and

Allison, who wrote the libretto for the "Ogallallas," agreed to

work it out. That same night with Waller's really brilliant musical

conception in his mind, Mr. Allison wrote what might be considered

the first three verses of the present revision, which were set to

Waller's music, written for a deep baritone, and published by Pond.

Thereafter during the rehearsal of the "Ogallallas" no session was

complete until Eugene Cowles, in his big, rich bass, had sung

Allison's three verses of "Fifteen Men on the Dead Man's Chest" to

Waller's music, as "lagniappe," while cold chills raced up and down

the spines of his hearers--more or less immune to sensations of

that character.

[13] Incubation at that time. Production in 1893.

As I write I have before me a copy of the music, the title page of

which reads as follows: "A Piratical Ballad. Song for Bass or Deep

Baritone. Words by Young E. Allison. Music by Henry Waller. New

York. Published by William A. Pond & Co. 1891."

Later it occurred to Mr. Allison that he had done scant justice to

an idea full of great possibilities, and another verse was added,

and still later another, making five in all, when in a more

polished condition it was submitted to the _Century_ for

publication, and accepted, though later the editor asked to have

the closing lines re-constructed as being a bit too strong for his

audience. Mr. Allison felt that to bring back those drink-swollen

and weighted bodies "wrapp'd in a mains'l tight" from their "sullen

plunge in the sullen swell, ten fathoms deep on the road to hell"

would cut the heart out of the idea--while admitting to the

_Century's_ editor that such a sentiment might not be entirely

fitted for his clientele--and so declined to make the alteration.

About this time Mr. Allison had "Derelict" privately printed for

circulation among friends. I have in my possession his printer's

copy, and the various revisions in his own handwriting--probably a

dozen in all.

Six years after the first verses were written, Mr. Allison decided

to inject a woman into his "Reminiscence of Treasure Island," as he

styles it, which was most adroitly done in the fifth verse--last

written--and in the private copies it is set in Italics as a

delicate intimation that the theme of a woman was foreign to the

main idea which he attempted to carry out just as he believed

Stevenson might have done. There was no woman on Treasure Island

yet she passes here without question.

Shortly after the sixth verse had been added, the editors of the

_Rubric_--a Chicago magazine venture of the late 90's[14]--asked

Mr. Allison for permission to publish the five verses which had

fallen into their hands, and in granting the request he furnished

the later revision in six verses. This was published on eight pages

of the _Rubric_ in two colors, very happily illustrated, I thought,

and was captioned "On Board the Derelict."

[14] Vol. I No. 1, 1901.

It is the fine adjustment, the extreme delicacy, the very

artfulness of the whole poem, I might say, which has led you into

believing it "a rough, unstudied sailor's jingle" and in stating

editorially, "it is not likely however that he [Mr. Allison] wrote

the famous old chanty." Were it not that you hazarded this

speculation I would not feel called upon to recite this history, in

justice to Mr. Allison, who is one of the most honorable, modest

and original men of letters and who would scorn to enter the lists

in an effort to prove that what he had created was his own. Among

those who know him like Henry Watterson, Madison Cawein, James H.

Mulligan, (who was one of Stevenson's friends, present in Samoa

when he died), James Whitcomb Riley, and a host of others he needs

no defense.

Mr. Mason's comment in your issue of October 4, 1914, is a very

fine tribute to the work of a stranger to him and testifies to his

artistic judgment, for a study of this "old chanty" will prove it

to be a work of art, not only for the tremendous lines of which Mr.

Mason speaks, but because it creates the impression of antiquity

while being entirely modern by every rule of versification.

If you take the pains to scan the lines you must soon admit how

subtle and delicate are the alternating measures, prepared

purposely to create the very idea of age and coarseness and

succeeding with every almost matchless line and selected word.

Just a word more. Of course I cannot pretend to say how the version

published in your issue of September 20, 1914, got copied into the

"Old Scrap Book" to which "W. L." refers, but violence to the text

and the meter--which you may determine by reference to the

authentic copy inclosed herewith--would indicate that it had been

"expurgated" for drawing room recital by an ultra-fastidious[15] who

nevertheless recognized its great force.

[15] And non-poetic.

By the way, Mr. Allison wrote "The Passing of Major Kilgore," not

"Major Galbraith," one of the first really good newspaper stories

"from the inside" then written, though since there have been many.

Yours very truly,

C. I. HITCHCOCK

Louisville, October 6, 1914.

YO-HO-HO _and a_ BOTTLE OF RUM

It has not been the purpose of this sketch of a poem's history, with

which has been joined other matters, reminiscent or germane, to enter

into a discussion relative to the origin of chanties, or to attempt to

trace the four lines of Captain Billy Bones' song to any source beyond

their appearance in "Treasure Island." In a more or less extensive,

though desultory, reading of a little of almost everything, the writer

has never stumbled upon any chanty or verse from which the famous

quatrain might have sprung. Nor has he ever met anyone who remembers to

have read or heard of anything of the kind. This includes Allison

himself, an omnivorous reader, a Stevenson admirer and student, a

friend of many of Stevenson's friends, and who, since the appearance of

"Treasure Island," has had hundreds of letters and conversations

bearing on the subject.

While "Yo-ho-ho and a bottle of rum," as a line, occasionally has since

been used in modern versification, but without any of the Stevenson

flavor and seldom with much poetic or dramatic instinct, all

authorities appear to be agreed that he evolved the quatrain. This

however is not a point at issue here. What seems to be of prime

importance to this narrative though, is that Allison, taking this

quatrain as a starting point, wrote a wholly modern versification in

words and meter so skillfully used as to create not only a vivid

atmosphere of piracy and antiquity, but of unskillfulness and

coarseness. That is the highest expression of art.

Since _The New York Times Book Review_ very unjustly raised a question

of the authorship of "Derelict," it has been my privilege to read the

really remarkable correspondence that has reached Mr. Allison from men

all over the country who have been treasuring newspaper clippings of

perverted versions of the poem out of pure admiration for its classical

lines and the bold portrayal of a grewsome story. These letters have

increased since _The Scoop_ of the Press Club of Chicago printed the

correspondence [See "The Unpublished Letter"] addressed to _The New

York Times Book Review_. _The Scoop_ continued its interesting

discussion of the poem in the issue of October 24, under a caption of

"Yo-ho-ho!" and incorporated a communication from "our Bramleykite

Pilling" on chanties in general, submitting also a criticism of

Allison's sea-faring knowledge of the consistency of mainsails and the

size of hawsers. If anything were needed to prove that "Derelict" is

not "of the sea," this in itself would be sufficient. _The Scoop_

article is worthy of production in toto:

YO-HO-HO!

In an annoying discussion of Young Allison's "Derelict" and the

origin of the chanty beginning "Fifteen men on the Dead Man's

Chest," _The New York Times_ quotes Robert Louis Stevenson as

saying "Treasure Island came out of Kingsley's 'At Last,' where I

got 'The Dead Man's Chest.'" That is interesting, and apparently

authentic, but it has nothing to do with Allison's poem. The

development of that poem, as related by C. I. Hitchcock in _The

Scoop_ two weeks ago, is as clearly established as the similar

process out of which emerged Smith's "Evolution," and is abundantly

attested. Allison's chanty is one of the best, if not the very

best, in its class, and _The Scoop_ is glad to have been given a

chance to so accredit it.

Taking up the subject matter, our Bramleykite Pilling, a retired

mariner now enjoying his otium cum dignitate at the town of Athol

in the state of Massachusetts, writes this letter:

"In the days when sailing ships and sailors were on the

deep, chanties were used with every heave or pull.

"Fifteen or twenty men trailing onto a rope, fitting each

other like spoons, as the sway-back pull induced whatever

was at the other end to give way.

"Nothing ever was broken, as it was seen to that such a

possibility did not exist; hence the command 'Break

something, break something.'

"A chanty contained one verse or line only, the rest

depending on the composition of the man who sang the verse

or line. The pull was always at the accent of the chorus,

as follows:

"'Blow a man down is a blow me down trick.

Blow--Blow--Blow--a man Down.

Blow a man down to the home of old Nick.

Give me some time to blow a man down.'

"The pull being at every other line, there are eight pulls

in the above.

"For a quick pulling chanty we often use this one:

"'Rendso was no sailor--

Rendso, boys, Rendso,

He shipped on board a whaler--

Rendso, boys, Rendso.'

"What happened to Rendso depended on the imagination of the

one who sang the 'coal box'--the line. Here is a heaving

chanty, or slow pull:

"'To South Australia we're bound to go--

Heave away, heave away.

Let the wind blow high or low--

We're bound to South Australia.

We're going home and don't give a damn--

Heave away, heave away.

For the captain, the mate or any other man--

We're bound to South Australia.'

"'Fifteen men on the dead man's chest' never was used as a

chanty. It would require too much bass; but it was used as

a drone, which it is. An abstracted man would use a line,

or may be, the whole verse, or the first line, used as

derision. For illustration:

"When I was last at the Press Club a question pertaining to

the sea came up. One man sought the dictionary. To express

my contempt I repeated the first line. 'We have no use for

the dictionary. To hell with it,' expresses the idea. We

sailors have a language of our own. It is ours, it is up to

us to put you right when the impossible is said. I quote

two such lines:

"'We wrapped 'em all in a mains'l tight

With twice ten turns of the hawser's bight!

"These two lines are part of a poem written by Young

Allison as a continuance of the Billy Bones song in

Treasure Island.

"A mainsail is made of 0, 1 or 2 canvas, which will stand

alone; 28 sheet-iron would do as well.

"A hawser, with us, is anything in the shape of a rope

which is above six inches circumference. You will note that

the bight is used--two parts, or loop. Instead of using the

largest rope on board a ship, the smallest--skysail

bunt-line--would have been more to the point.

"A sailor would get back at me by saying 'Perhaps she

didn't carry skysails.'

"I would reply, 'Suppose the mainsail was as soft as silk

and the hawser as pliable, would you, as a sailor, throw

them away on dead men?'

"A mistaken idea exists that Stevenson wrote the Billy

Bones song and only used one verse in "Treasure Island." He

'quotes' the only verse there is. We of the sea locate the

scene of the verse at Dead Chest Island, half way between

the S. W. & S. E. points of Porto Rico, four and one-half

miles off shore, which was used as a buccaneer rendezvous,

and later as the haven of wreckers and smugglers. It was

first named by the Spanish 'Casa de Muertos'--the Coffin.

"While I knew that Stevenson wrote, I did not know him as a

writer. I knew him as the grandson and son of men who dared

to do, and who achieved in the doing. I also knew him as a

man interested in everything pertaining to the sea.

"In fancy, I can see him gazing off to leeward, and hear

him drone--as of yore--

"'Fifteen men on the dead man's chest.'"

My personal interest in "Derelict" from its earliest stages has led me to

discuss it with many people, some of them A. B.'s, and this is the first

criticism I have ever heard of the technic of the words used to convey the

picture. I do not mean to say that Bramleykite Filling's points are not

well taken, technically, but I do say that qualified sailors, with literary

judgment, have been carried over these delinquencies of technic, if that

expresses it, by the very vividness but simplicity of the picture, which

could not be so were there a false note in either sentiment or portrayal.

Thus for this purpose a mainsail is a piece of jute bagging, if you please,

or ordinary canvas, and a hawser is a flexible rope.

When _The Scoop_ reached my hand with its entertaining and not unjust

criticism, I besought Allison for a few lines of comment to add to my

collection of "Derelict" treasures. In the same old characteristic way

(same old black pencil; same old spongy copy paper) he wrote me the

following note with which this volume closes:

Oct. 26, 1914.

Dear Hitch:

Bramleykite Pilling's comments on "Derelict," from the standpoint

of scientific criticism, seem to me to be beyond any sort of

reproach. He is evidently an actual, real water sailor who learned

his nautics within the smell of bilgewater and the open sea. My own

education as an able seaman was gained from years of youthful deep

study of dime-novel sea yarns by Ned Buntline, Fenimore Cooper,

Sylvanus Cobb, Jr., Billy Bowline, and other masters of the sea in

libraries. I have, however, made two ocean trips from Norfolk to

New York, time 23 hours. On both occasions I went sound asleep at

the end of the first hour and woke up at the end of twenty-third

hour. Under such circumstances I may have missed many important

details of realism. I have also visited often the tomb of that fine

old patriot-pirate and ex-Alderman, Dominique You, in the old

French cemetery at New Orleans. As chief gunner for Jean Lafitte,

he was some pirate; as chief artilleryman for Gen. Andrew Jackson

at the battle of New Orleans, he was some patriot. I feel stronger

in my piracy than in my seamanship. I love criticism--especially of

poetry. If there is a single verse, or, mayhap, one line, of

"Derelict" that will hold, without leaking, anything of a specific

gravity heavier than moonshine, it would surprise me. But it

_seems_ to, when it is adopted as a "real chanty"--and that's the

test, that it "seems."

Y. E. A.

Transcriber's Note: The book has a Pocket with 7 pieces of paper

which are facsimiles noted in the text. The music for _A Piratical

Ballad_ has been transcribed and is available as a _Finale_ .mus

file, a pdf file, and a midi file.

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