Old: Manning's quarters, He met Marc Stoworth
New: Manning's quarters. He met Marc Stoworth
Old: daring the man to take offense. He didn't."
New: daring the man to take offense. He didn't.
Old: "Where's Mara? Rynason asked.
New: "Where's Mara?" Rynason asked.
Old: echo of Horng's screams in his mind
New: echo of Horng's screams in his mind.
Old: Manning said. I'm going to throw out
New: Manning said. "I'm going to throw out
Old: he said. Tonight I'm busy.
New: he said. "Tonight I'm busy.