SC. 1. "Upon your Grace's part; black and feärful
_Up_on the opposer'_s_."
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"But I am sure the younger of our nature."
Rowe's reading of _nation_ for 'nature' seems certain.
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SC. 2. "_Who_ sold a goodly manor for a song."
Both the sense and the metre require this addition. 'Sold' is the
correction of 3rd folio for _hold_ of the 1st.
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"Your old ling and your Isbels of the court."
We should, I think, read '_new_ ling,' as 'old ling' had just been
mentioned.
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"If thou engrossest all the griefs are thine,
Thou robbest me of a moiety."
No doubt _are_ gives sense, but I should prefer _as_. I have, however,
made no change.
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"'Tis but the boldness haply of his hand
_To_ which his heart was not consenting to."
The folio reads "of his hand haply."
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"The fellow has a deal too much of that,
Which holds him much to have."
The folio reads "of that too much." As yet no one has made sense of
the second line. Perhaps for 'holds' we should read _hurts_, _foils_,
or _soils_. I have adopted the first. 'To have' is, the having. (See
Introd. p. 70.)
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"Move the still-peering air
That sings with piercing."
No sense in which _peer_ is used will answer here. I once thought that
'still' might be taken in the sense of quiet, tranquil; but I have
been unable to find an instance of its being so used in composition.
It seems, however, to have found favour in the eyes of Mr. Dyce.
The reading generally adopted is that of Steevens, _piecing_; and
though the usual meaning of this verb is, to eke, to add, it is also
used in the sense of closing, filling. Mr. Dyce doubts if "a poet
with a delicate ear would have written _piecing ... piercing_," not
recollecting that the latter was pronounced _percing_. I should,
however, prefer _fleeting_, which I have given in my Edition. In the
Third Part of The Seven Champions (ch. xiii.), the author of which
was more than once indebted to Shakespeare, or _vice versâ_, we read,
"Whose feathery arrows outrun the _piercing_ eye, and cut a passage
through the _fleetiag_ air." Spenser, too, has (F. Q. ii. 8. 2) "the
_flitting_ sky (_i.e._ air)." Elsewhere he says (vii. 7 22) that the
air is felt "to _flit still_," and in The Tempest (iii. 3) we meet with
the "still-closing waters." At the same time, as 'peering' may have
been suggested by 'piercing' in the next line, the poet's word may not
have resembled it.
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"I met the ravin lion when he roar'd."
As 'ravin' only occurs as a verb, the poet probably used here the part.
_ravening_. "As a ravening and a roaring lion" (Ps. xxii. 13) was
evidently in his mind.
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SC. 5. "Enter old Widow of Florence, her daughter, Violenta, and
Mariana, with other citizens."
This is the original stage-direction, in which Violenta--an evident
mistake for Violante--might appear to be the name of the daughter,
though she is always called Diana. Helen, however, at the end of the
scene, mentions a 'gentle maid' along with Mariana, whom she invites to
supper.
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"I write good creature: wheresoe'er she is,
Her heart weights sadly."
Here, as in ii. 3, the verb 'write' makes no sense. The 2nd folio
has 'I (ay) right,' which, from the punctuation, would seem to have
been a mere makeshift; the ordinary reading is that of Malone, 'A
right good creature,' which we may be very sure is not what the poet
wrote. As in Hamlet (ii. 1) the 4to, 1604, has "a fetch of _wit_" for
"a fetch of _warrant_" of the folio, my first impulse was to read
_I warrant_--also that of the editors of the Globe Shakespeare; but
I then fixed on "_I wis_," and so it stands in my Edition. I am now
convinced that the reading of the 2nd folio, when properly pointed, is
the true one. I point it thus: "Ay, right.--Good creature! wheresoe'er
she is." The 'Ay, right,' expresses the widow's assent to the truth of
her daughter's observation; she then proceeds to speak of Helena. To
my great surprise and gratification, I found, after I had made this
natural and certain correction, that I had been completely anticipated
in it by Capell. How it does provoke one to think of the wilful
blindness or obtuseness of editors! For nearly an entire century they
have had the true reading before their eyes, and never could see it!
Singer has "Ay, right; good creature" etc.; but the punctuation shows
he did not understand the passage.
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SC. 6. "Oh, for the love of laughter let him fetch _off_ his drum."
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"This counterfeit lump of ore will be melted."
'Ore' is Theobald's correction of _ours_ in the folio.
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"Hinder not the honour of his design."
For 'honour' I, with others, have adopted Theobald's correction
_humour_; which, however, is not absolutely certain.
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SC. 7. "That she'll demand. A ring the county wears."
As this is the only place in the play where 'county' occurs, and as we
have had 'the count he' twice already in this scene, I think we ought
to read so here also. (See on Twelfth Night, i. 5.)
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"Herself most chastely absent. After _this_."
The 2nd folio added _this_, which had evidently been effaced.
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"Is wicked meaning in a lawful deed,
And lawful meaning in a lawful act."
If we were not aware of the abjectness of printer-worship, we might
wonder at Warburton's most certain correction _wicked_ for the last
'lawful' not having been adopted by every editor.